Thursday, May 27, 2010

What is the night? by Eden Macneil

We have been learning similes and metaphors in poetry, Eden chose to do a poem on the night using metaphors:

What is the night?
The night is a black monster creeping up on you,
it is a black page with yellow spots on it,
the night is a shadow that covers the sky,
it is an ink spot that is spreading on a piece of paper,
the night is a bar of melted dark chocolate with no sugar.
Eden Macneil

1 comment:

Norma Farmer said...

Eden,

That is so cleaver, wow you are really quite good at poetry.

I enjoyed reading it. Thanks,

lots of love from nana.